Elmore Leonard Knows What to Leave Out of Djibouti

November 8, 2010 | 2 books mentioned 7 4 min read

Walker Percy was a big Elmore Leonard fan.  Way back in 1987, during the high noon of a career that has now reached its rich and plummy twilight, Percy asked: “Why is Elmore Leonard so good?”  Percy answered: “He doesn’t stick to the same guy in the same place.”  And: “You begin to notice his prose, the way he moves people around.  People get shot in dependent clauses.”  And: “The snap and crackle of the dialogue is something to hear.”  To wit: “(Leonard) often drops the word ‘if’ in dialogue – and uses hardly any conjunctions.  ‘I had a tire iron we could find out in ten minutes.’  This sentence could use an ‘if’ and a comma and would be worse for it.  Yes, Mr. Leonard knows what he’s doing.”

coverIndeed he does.  And he proves it yet again with his new novel, Djibouti, which takes us from more familiar Leonard haunts – Detroit, Miami, Las Vegas, Hollywood, Atlantic City, New Orleans – all the way to that charming open sewer of a city on the Gulf of Aden that gives the book its title.  Leonard’s two heroes, film-maker Dara Barr and her 6-foot-6, 72-year-old black cameraman Xavier LeBo, have come here for a little change of pace.  After winning major awards, including an Oscar, for documentaries about Bosnia, white supremacists and post-Katrina New Orleans, Dara wants to try her hand at filming some Somali pirates doing what they do so well – hijacking humongous freighters and holding them for humongous ransoms.

Xavier, a street-smart  former merchant seaman, has sailed these treacherous waters many times, and he wastes no time giving Dara the lay of the land and introducing her to a cast of characters who, in time-honored Leonard style, are rarely what they appear to be.  There’s a loose cannon of a Texas billionaire named Billy Wynn, who may or may not be CIA but who is definitely sailing around the world with a knockout named Helene, a Paris runway model who will become Mrs. Wynn if she can make the trip without whining or getting seasick.  There’s Idris Mohammed, an American-educated Somali pirate who drives a Mercedes and doesn’t see himself or his crew as villains: “I think of us as the Coast Guard giving out fines to ships that contaminate our seas, thousands of them leaving their waste in the waters we once fished.”

Then there’s Ari Ahmed Sheikh Bakar, “known as Harry in England,” one of the “good” guys who tries to dissuade pirates from being pirates but isn’t above selling them AK-47s so they can sell them at double the price to local gangsters and warlords.  And finally there’s Jama Raisuli, born James Russell, a black Al Qaeda terrorist from Miami who has come here looking to blow up something big.  Like maybe that tanker full of Liquid Natural Gas parked offshore.

All of the virtues listed by Walker Percy are on display here, along with several he neglected to mention, most notably the moral ambiguity of all the characters and all their causes, which is the tool Leonard uses to make his points while he makes us laugh.  Billy sums up this pervasive moral ambiguity: “There’s no way to tell who’s good and who’s bad in this fucked-up Mohammedan world.”  This is neither politically incorrect nor insensitive because Leonard is an equal-opportunity satirist; he skewers not only religious zealots but the CIA, pirates, rich Republicans, Hollywood phonies and jihadists, in no particular order.

And when Billy gets wound up on his beverage of choice, $150 bottles of champagne, and starts waxing patriotic, Helene, the funniest character in the book, thinks to herself: “He was the guy Sterling Hayden played in Dr. Strangelove, General Jack D. Ripper.  How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb, the subtitle.  Sterling Hayden was so serious he was weird.  Calm, talking about the Communist conspiracy to put fluoridation in our drinking water to fuck up our precious bodily fluids.”

When Helene confides to Dara that Billy wants to blow up the LNG tanker here so that Al Qaeda won’t be able to blow it up once it reaches Louisiana, Dara muses: “I’m guessing.  He’d like to be known as a war hero who got the Medal of Honor posthumously without dying.”

After shooting a lot of footage of pirates, Dara and Xavier begin to wonder if they should be making a feature film instead of a documentary.  While this allows Leonard to do some clever riffing on the inanity of Hollywood, it also points up the book’s main flaw, and it’s not a small one.  For a hundred pages or so, Dara and Xavier sit in her hotel room in Djibouti watching the footage they shot while at sea, reliving adventures that have already happened.  It makes for a choppy narrative.  Only when Jama Raisula takes center stage and the dead bodies start piling up does the story take flight.  Sometimes it’s good for a crime novel when the bad guys are just plain bad.

And Jama’s the goods.  In a single scene he shoots five men, including his Al Qaeda mentor.  In another he shoots a lovely prostitute through the brain.  He shoots a former Navy SEAL hired by Billy.  And when Dara and Xavier finish shooting their movie, Jama goes to New Orleans looking to shoot them.

As is the case with the dozen other Elmore Leonard novels I’ve read, Djibouti succeeds largely because of the things that got left out.  Back story, exposition, physical descriptions of characters and scenery, weather, exclamation points, adverbs – all are in short supply here.  And Leonard always stays behind the scenes, where he belongs.

“If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it,” he once said.  Elsewhere he has said that when he was learning to write fiction he became a great admirer of Hemingway.  “You study him closely,” Leonard said, “and you realize all the stuff he leaves out that you think is in the story.  That’s always interested me.”

It still interests him.  And that may be the main reason why, at the ripe age of 85, Elmore Leonard is still so good.

is a staff writer for The Millions. He is the author of the novels Motor City Burning, All Souls’ Day, and Motor City, and the nonfiction book American Berserk and The Age of Astonishment: John Morris in the Miracle Century, From the Civil War to the Cold War. His writing has appeared in numerous publications, including Granta, The New York Times, The (London) Independent, L.A. Weekly, Popular Mechanics, and The Daily Beast. He lives in New York City.