Choking Hazard

By posted at 12:00 pm on April 28, 2016 2

Check out new fiction from You Too Can Have a Body Like Mine author Alexandra Kleeman.

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2 Responses to “Choking Hazard”

  1. Sham
    at 3:00 pm on April 28, 2016

    I’m sorry but this is a terrible story. Good gosh. I thought Kleeman was supposed to represent the new avant garde. This is straight out of an undergrad fiction workshop. Plot, prose, characterization all tedious. Yet this will be the only piece of fiction many people read this week. Contemporary American lit has so much more to offer than this. Fiction can be inventive, funny, fun, emotionally resonant, edgy…alive…this has all the life of a last-minute high school English paper.

  2. steven augustine
    at 3:36 pm on April 28, 2016

    Yipes! Agreed. I’ve read a hundred pieces as time-wastingly “okay” (until that amateurish finish) as that, online, in the past year or so. Why is that particular not bad/not good thing in the NYer? I can only imagine a shrug in response.

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